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Small press and small stories

It's hard to get a short story published these days. In fact, market reporters say it's easier for a new writer to sell a novel than a short story. And this is not for lack of talent or stories, but...

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The Day Job

They tell you, in how-to books and workshops, don't quit the day job. In today's economy, however, quitting the day job isn't so hard as finding it. I moved from Los Angeles to Fort Collins, Colorado in August, 1991. My...

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Rejections Three

Received three rejections recently. "The Perfect Home" didn't find a perfect home at Analog. Stanley Schmidt wrote that it "didn't strike me quite right for Analog, but thanks for letting me see it." Aboriginal returned "Red, White (and) Blues" with...

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Gored

A form rejection today from Gorezone for "Sleep of the Just." It spent just over three months there....

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New voices at Little Bookshop of Horrors

Tomi called and told me that I would be scheduled for the Roadkill Press/Little Bookshop of Horrors "New Voices" series in March, and asked me to bring a picture and bio to tomorrow night's reading for the flyer/brochure they make....

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Mailing

Sent "If I Could Read Your Mind" to Analog and "The Perfect Home" to Tomorrow....

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"Only Natural"

Finished today, 3100 words, just in time to submit to the Northern Colorado Writers' Workshop. This is the finished version of what was originally titled "Fred and Ethel and the Little Guy with the Hair." Also sent this one to...

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Rejection

Your basic form rejection for "Homesteading" today from the SciFi Channel Magazine....

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Rejection

A quick (8 day) rejection for "The Perfect Home" by Tomorrow SF. A.J. Budrys wrote "I thought it was good in some ways, and pretty much spun a consistent narrative thread. But, unfortunately not enough so I could decide to...

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Lots of mailing

Today I sent "Homesteading" to Cemetary Dance, "In a Blaze of Glory" to Space & Time, "Red, White (and) Blues" to SF Age, "The Perfect Home" to SciFi Channel Magazine and queried the status of "Famished" at Midnight Zoo....

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The prodigan daughter returns

Gardner Dozois returned "My Radon Daughter," the only story that Jill and I have written together, today. He wrote, "This has a lot of interesting stuff in it, but it's not really for me, I fear, and so I'm going...

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Blues returned

Scott Edelman returned "Red, White (and) Blues" with a personal note saying that "it didn't work for [him]."...

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Mailing

Sent "My Radon Daughter" to SF Age....

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The penis story

Ed Bryant called as the editing representative for Roadkill Press, to tell me that they (Doug, Tomi and Ed) had collectively decided on "Only Natural" for the New Voices chapbook and wanted some changes, namely: The ending felt rushed to...

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Argh!

"In a Blaze of Glory" came back undelivered today from Space & Time. The address I had for them was old....

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Two more rejections

Scott Edelman of SF Age returned "My Radon Daughter" with the comment "though it had its moments, it did not win me over." My correspondence with Janis Wells, the assistant editor at Amazing Stories, continues. She rejected "Cinema Verite" by...

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Re-jection and -writing

"If I Could Read Your Mind" came back from Analog today by form rejection. I've finally finished the rewrite of "the penis story," now 5,000 words and titled "Going Mobile." I'll send this off to Doug and Tomi tomorrow so...

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Time to get mailing

Mailed out "Going Mobile" to Little Bookshop of Horrors today. The chapbook will have a print run of 200 copies, both Royce and I will sign it, and we will share any profits from the sale of it three ways...

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More mailing

Trying to make sure all my stories that have been finished are out there in slush piles, today I mailed "In a Blaze of Glory" to Space and Time (found new address online), "Famished" to Tomorrow SF, "If I Could...

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Rejection

Kris Rusch of Fantasy and Science Fiction writes, "'Earth Mars Venus' is cute, but I'm afraid it's not quite what I'm looking for. Sorry. Please do send your next." I always love to see that tag line....

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Quickest rejections in the west

Scott Edelman of SF Age continues his string of rejections in less than two weeks, this one for "Cinema Verite." He writes that it "didn't seem quite right for us. Do keep trying, though." I do love the personal rejections...

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Yet more fast rejections

A guy could get a complex from these when they come back like boomerangs, though. Today "If I Could Read Your Mind" came back from Gorezone with a form rejection, while A.J. Budrys of Tomorrow has a personal rejection that...

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Rejection

Ellen Datlow at OMNI returned "Going Mobile" with a note that they don't generally take reprints, and suggests Gardner at Asimov's....

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Mailing

Sending "Going Mobile" to Asimov's today....

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Sending things out

More mailing. Today: "Earth Mars Venus" to SF Age, "If I Could Read Your Mind" to Fantasy and Science Fiction, and "Cinema Verite" to Analog....

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Form rejection

"Red, White (and) Blues" returns from Hitchcock's with a form rejection....

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Biases

Scott Edelman of SF Age returned "Earth Mars Venus" today with a note that he has "a bias against short shorts." Oh, well. Note that in my submission database for him....

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Long note rejection

A. Tidmarsh wrote me a long rejection from Interzone for "Cattrap." He or she says, "It is not for us, I'm afraid. It is (to my mind) about Philip K. Dick but does not work in the way that--for example--Michael...

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Rejection

"Homesteading" was rejected by Richard Chizmar at Cemetary Dance with the checklist form rejection. Checks include "not original enough for my readers or too predictable," "not chilling, powerful or disturbing enough," "theme did not interest us; may be suitable for...

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Mailing to the possessives

Sent "Earth Mars Venus" to Asimov's and "Cattrap" to Hitchcock's today....

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Rejection

Stanley Schmidt of Analog returned "Cinema Verite" with the note that "it seems to me more a 'Twilight Zone' then an 'Analog' story." So true. Unfortunately, The Twilight Zone Magazine has ceased publication....

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Rejection

"If I Could Read Your Mind" came back from Fantasy and Science Fiction with a personal note from Kris Rusch saying that it was "interesting, but not quite what [she's] looking for." She did add a "Sorry. Please do send...

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Two rejections

Two rejections today, including a very long note from Janis Wells of Amazing Stories saying that both she and Kim Mohan had looked over this story but had too many questions about it, feeling that it was a puzzle with...

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"The Laws of God and Man"

Wrote the complete story today, 6,900 words, based on a comment by my professor in Philosophy 415 class about immortality....

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Form rejection

Three weeks out to Hitchcock's and "Cattrap" is back already, along with a form rejection....

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Massive mailing

Finally got around to printing out stories and connecting up rejections in the database to figure out where everything needed to go:"Sleep of the Just" to Hitchcock's"Cinema Verite" to The New Yorker"My Radon Daughter" to Analog"If I Could Read Your...

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Going out

Sent "Going Mobile" out to see if SF Age did reprints, and also sent it for consideration in the Best of the Midwest anthology....

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Rejection

"If I Could Read Your Mind" was rejected by Weird Tales, which is also now closed to submissions until October....

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Personal rejection

Scott Edelman of SF Age sent "Going Mobile" back with this note: "Thanks for trying me with 'Going Mobile,' but I'm afraid that it's too far over the top for me." It was also rejected by the Best of the...

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Story updates

A.J. Budrys of Tomorrow SF returned "Red, White (and) Blues" with a note that he thought it "telegraphed." Ah, well. Sent "If I Could Read Your Mind" to Cemetary Dance and "Going Mobile" to Full Spectrum....

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More story updates

Sent "Red, White (and) Blues" to Expanse, and also sent "The Laws of God and Man" to Steve Tem for his untitled anthology of Colorado writers while also submitting that story to the Northern Colorado Writers Workshop for comments at...

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Rejection

A form rejection today for "Sleep of the Just" from Hitchcock's....

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Another rejection

Gordon Linzer of Space and Time returned "In a Blaze of Glory" today. He wrote, "I like this story a lot--I couldn't resist reading it--but, the timing is bad--I'm on the verge of winding down the magazine (after 25 years)....

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Sending it out again

"Sleep of the Just" is being sent this time to Janis Wells at Amazing Stories....

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Form rejection

Just a form rejection from Boy's Life on "Homesteading" today....

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I collect rejections

And today I added another form rejection from Playboy, for my story "Cattrap," to my collection....

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In and Out

Sent "Homesteading" to Tomorrow SF today. Received a long letter from Steve Tem that detailed his problems with "The Laws of God and Man." Specifically, for his Colorado anthology, he felt the story could have been set anywhere, and didn't...

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And Just in

Gardner Dozois of Asimov's returned "Earth, Mars, Venus" today with the note that it was "cute, but not for [him]."...

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Mailing

Sending "In a Blaze of Glory" out to SF Age and "Cattrap" to Aboriginal SF today....

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Rejections

"My Radon Daughter" received a form rejection response from Analog while "Homesteading" received the same thing from Tomorrow SF....

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Mail out

Sent "My Radon Daughter" to Fantasy and Science Fiction and "Homesteading" to Playboy today....

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More to mail

And sent "Earth, Mars, Venus" to Interzone today....

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Rejection

Scott Edelman of SF Age returned "In a Blaze of Glory" today. He wrote that it was "an interesting story, but it is more suited for a horror magazine, I'm afraid."...

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More rejection

Not surprising, but The New Yorker returned "Cinema Verite" with a form rejection today....

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Sending them out again

Sent "In a Blaze of Glory" to Ghosttide and "The Perfect Home" to Hitchcock's....

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Form rejection

Again, unsurprising, a form rejection from Playboy, this time for "Homesteading."...

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The best kind of rejections

If it's got to be a rejection, the kind I get from Janis Wells of Amazing Stories are the kind I like to get. Personal, critical comments on the story, explaining exactly why she had trouble with the story. This...

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Mailing

Sending "Homesteading" to Iniquities, "Cinema Verite" to Tomorrow SF, "Sleep of the Just" to Analog, and "Earth, Mars, Venus" to The New Yorker....

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Rejection

Form rejection from Hitchcock's for "The Perfect Home."...

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Rejection

Form rejection from Ghosttide for "In a Blaze of Glory."...

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Checklist rejection

"If I Could Read Your Mind" came back from Cemetary Dance with a checklist rejection. Rich Chizmar checked "nicely written" and wrote "excellent" beside it, but he also checked "theme did not interest us; may be suitable for another editor"...

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Mailing

Sent "The Perfect Home" to Playboy, "In a Blaze of Glory" to Interzone, and "If I Could Read Your Mind" to Pulphouse....

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Checklist rejection

"Cattrap" came back from Aboriginal SF with the following checked from Charlie Ryan, "it's too expository, too much explanation, or explanation disguised as dialogue--needs tighter prose," and he underlined, "characters aren't alive" and "the plot isn't strong enough." He wrote...

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Mailing

Sent "Cattrap" to Marion Zimmer Bradley's Fantasy Magazine....

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Rejection

A form rejection from Full Spectrum for "Going Mobile."...

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Rejection

Form rejection for "Sleep of the Just" in the mail today from Analog....

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Another form rejection

This time, it's a form rejection from Expanse for "Red, White (and) Blues."...

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And yet another

A form rejection from Tomorrow SF for "Cinema Verite." A.J.'s rejections look like they are personal, but after having received a number of them, with the same comment, you realize that he says the same nice little line to everyone....

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Mailing, mailing

Sending "Going Mobile" to Amazing, "Sleep of the Just" to Full Spectrum, "Cinema Verite" to Aboriginal SF, and "Red, White (and) Blues" to Strange Plasma....

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Rejection

Personal rejection from Kris Rusch of Fantasy and Science Fiction for "My Radon Daughter." Kris wrote, "I'm afraid it's not quite what I'm looking for. Sorry."...

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The rejection, the rejection

Received a letter from Strange Plasma, whom I had sent "Red, White (and) Blues" to recently, saying that they are now a closed market. Sigh. Another one bites the dust. Playboy sent a form rejection back with "The Perfect Home."...

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Keeping them out there

Sending out "Things to Do When You're Dead" (new story, finished last weekend) to Playboy (I like to start at the best-paying market, and work my way down), "My Radon Daughter" to Tomorrow SF, "The Perfect Home" to Fantasy and...

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Checklist rejection

"Homesteading" comes back from Iniquities with the following checks: "It's not quite for us" and "It didn't work for me."...

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Tomorrow is another day

But the form rejections from A.J. Budrys at Tomorrow SF continue to come, this time, for "My Radon Daughter."...

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Form rejection

This form rejection was from Marion Zimmer Bradley's Fantasy Magazine for "Cattrap."...

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Amazing going on hiatus

Received my regular personal rejection from Janis Wells at Amazing Stories, this time for "Going Mobile." I'd type what she says, but it's my current favorite story of mine, and she didn't like it at all, so let's leave it...

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Checklist rejection

Charlie Ryan of Aboriginal SF checked the following about "Cinema Verite": "we do not buy fantasy," "a bit too expository," "characters aren't alive or are too bland," and "the plot isn't strong enough." He also circled "try again with a...

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Back in the mail

"Things to Do When You're Dead" received a form rejection from Playboy, while "Red, White (and) Blues" didn't even make it to Glimpses because of a defunct address....

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Personal rejection

See, I can't say too many bad things about Jonathan Bond at Pulphouse, because he sends a nice note back with "If I Could Read Your Mind" where he writes, "I liked it quite a bit, and it was a...

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Personal rejection

Kris Rusch for Fantasy and Science Fiction wrote, about "The Perfect Home," "Weird story, Glen. I enjoyed it, but feel it's not quite right for F&SF."...

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These should have been in the mail

Finally got around to getting "Going Mobile" (to Analog) and "My Radon Daughter" (to Aboriginal SF) back in the mail and into the slush piles....

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more mailing

Sent "Cinema Verite" to Ghosttide and "Cattrap" to Glimmer Train today....

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Another closed market

"Cinema Verite" came back from Ghosttide with a note that says the magazine closed on 9/30/93....

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Lots of mailing

Let's get these stories into the slushpiles! Sent "Homesteading" to Offworld, "The Perfect Home" to Expanse, "Red, White (and) Blues" to Playboy, "If I Could Read Your Mind" to Iniquities, "Cineme Verite" to Pulphouse, and "Things to Do in Denver...

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Form rejection

A form rejection today from Full Spectrum for "Sleep of the Just."...

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Personal rejection

Jonathan Bond of Pulphouse wrote this in his rejection of "Cinema Verite": "I liked the writing in this, but guessed the ending by the second page. I look forward to seeing your next."...

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Lots of rejection

Three rejections today. Ouch. First was from OMNI for "Things to Do in Denver When You're Dead." Ellen Datlow said, "You've got some good writing and some good ideas in here but I feel on the whole it's a bit...

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