July 16, 2004

The Negative Review

A fascinating story about Dale Peck, a vitriolic book reviewer, on this morning's Morning Edition had J and I wondering outloud what it is about literary types that they can't handle negative reviews. In the story, a comparison is made between the often scathing reviews of movie critic Pauline Kael. "The literary world is too thin-skinned," one person said.

It is true that a movie is a work made by committee, while a novel is often the work of a single human being, and that any criticism of a book is often seen as a criticism of the author. Many authors learn from the first time they send out their work to a publisher and receive it back rejected that this is a logical fallacy and that to keep one's sanity intact, you have to separate the writer from the written. Unfortunately, many authors often forget this dictum after a book has been accepted and published. Their fans never learn this.

As a book reviewer and sometimes critic, I learned this first hand years ago after trying to put into words just what it was about the writing of Lois McMaster Bujold that I thought was more than simply "not to my taste" but instead "bad." The instance was sparked on a newsgroup discussion that was supposed to be about "the best" works of fiction in the science fiction genre and I had grown tired of seeing her work listed. Unlike Dale Peck, whose outrageous commentary includes statements like, "Rick Moody is the worst writer of his generation," I tried to keep exaggeration out of my comments, for I didn't consider Bujold the worst SF writer, although I do think her far from the best, and proceeded to point out why. Even Bujold herself joined in the discussion and we had an interesting on- and off-newsgroup exchange which basically resolved into (and I paraphrase from memory of something over seven years old) my contention that her writing on a sentence level was often weak if not poor and her contention was that it didn't matter if the overall effect was achieved. Or, to put it another way, she said that in creating a church, one doesn't focus on the individual stones that made up the flying buttresses, while I contended that I didn't consider a road with potholes to be a fine path even if I did eventually reach my destination.

For all my years of commenting on books--both in writing, much of which can be found on this site, and in discussions with peers--I've considered this exchange one of those defining moments of my intellectual development, where I first defined and codified what I personally considered important aspects of writing. It's not that I don't think structure, plot, or enjoyment a necessary portion of a book--but it is when I understood just how integral the sentence is as a building block that can't be ignored in the creation of those larger edifices. It was the culmination of a change that had begun for me back in the mid-1980s when I first began talking seriously about books and writing (because, although I had instruction in the fine points of English literature in high school, it was all about the surface characteristics of books and stories forced upon me rather than the defense of things that I enjoyed and admired). I had been an indiscriminate reader to that point: someone who would read Piers Anthony back to back with Gene Wolfe. To work in another analogy, it was like drinking cheap wine one night and a fine chardonnay the next; either is fine if all you're looking for is a little buzz, but when you learn to savor the flavor, only one will do.

The other thing I received from that exchange, however, was a spate of hate mail and rude commentary online from people who felt they had to defend Bujold personally (rather than defending the work) or came in late and didn't even take the time to understand the discussion, so when the story ended with Peck revealing that his reviews (the best now collected in a book called Hatchet Jobs) have made him persona non grata in the New York publishing world, I could also relate. It's fairly common knowledge among those of us who post reviews on Amazon.com that you catch a lot more positive votes with a gushing and praising review than with one that lists any reservations about the item--a situation that Amazon is perfectly happy with, as it is in their best interest to sell everything they list, not just simply the best. Which is why, among a number of reasons including the ability to "fake" reviews (an author can submit a gushing review of their own work, etc.), the commentary on Amazon shouldn't be trusted. Why then do I continue to post there? Because the readership there is magnitudes larger than I'll ever get with this post, and, possibly, if I continue to do good work, both here and there, people might come to see the benefit of someone who writes both positive and negative reviews...like, say, to go back to the film comparison, a Roger Ebert to a Rex Reed.

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Nicely put, Glen. I've twice had pangs of guilt over negative reviews I've written on my site, both times when the respective authors contacted me via email.

The first had sent me a copy of her book, practically begging me to read and review it. After she saw my honest (and somewhat negative) evaluation, she asked me to remove all mention of her book from my web site. (I refused.)

The second graciously noted that she respected my opinion, agreed that her novel had some flaws, and hoped that I had found something worthwhile in it.

In the first case, I regretted reading the book at all. In the second, I continue to feel bad for hurting the author. When writing a review, it's very easy to forget that there's (often) a living breathing person at the other end of the pen.

As a writer who also reviews books, I found your comments of great interest. I'll admit that in my reviews, I'm interested only in alerting readers to books that I think are worthwhile. Maybe that's cowardice on my part, but I still prefer it to trashing a bad book, however well-deserved the pan.

The dilemma of the writer is to maintain the sensitivity (often extreme) needed to do good work while developing a tough enough skin to withstand the slings and arrows of reviewers. Spend enough time on a particular work, pour enough of yourself into it, and a bad review can feel almost like a physical assault.

I'll admit that a good case can be made for going after excessively praised and highly successful writers whose rewards far outweigh their actual abilities, but that's another discussion.

Very good post, Glen.

I hardly write reviews at all anymore; alas. And I'm becoming more like PSargent -- more interested in drumming up interest in what I consider to be the good stuff than spending time writing reviews of bad stuff. For the latter, I may write a sentence or two, though, if it's really, really bad.

I just spent a good chunk of time reviewing a bunch of technical papers for a conference. I have a much harder time writing negative reviews for that (where the people are often students trying to get their paper accepted) than for authors who've actually already managed to be published. Even though peer review is what makes the scientific world go 'round. (I have no problem recommending "reject" mind you -- I just have a hard time being really negative in the 'notes to the author' section.)

Anyway.. interesting topic for discussion. You should point people to it on Bibliafiles and see if it generates any responses there, too.

I've reviewed a few books on my blog. Essentially, though, I also avoid negative reviews (I made one exception in a post where I mentioned two very popular writers who I think are somewhat lacking in the talent department).

If I don't enjoy a book, I also don't enjoy dredging up the negative feelings again just to spit them out on paper (or in this case random bits in the ether). If I find a GOOD book, I like to share the news, though :)

The bottom line is that writers are human, and giving a bad review is easy. It's often much harder to think of good things to say about a work than negative things. After all, you can spew negative comments based solely on format, diction, or style. If you give positive comments, it often reveals more about you as a person. At least, I find that making positive comments shows which facets of the novel echoed within me ;)

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