Ed Bryant called as the editing representative for Roadkill Press, to tell me that they (Doug, Tomi and Ed) had collectively decided on "Only Natural" for the New Voices chapbook and wanted some changes, namely:

• The ending felt rushed to them
• Needed more examples in body of story a la the video store sequence to emphasize the change that had taken place.

Ed and I went over the story and corrected some minor details. One of the things they would like to see changed as well was the title. I agree to everything, mainly because the comments were right on target. Still yet to see what the Northern Colorado Writers' Workshop has to say about the story; may make some modifications based on their comments as well.

Worked on "The Spontanity..." story, changing title to "The Forces of Aggression." Made the male character a little wilder, a little more dangerous. Want him to come back as the threatening hunter at the end of the story.